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Pain.
It's like
a bunch of red roses.
A beautiful thorn necklace.
Everyone has one.
With wreaths of leaves
on their heads and ankles.
Red blood mingles with red rose petals.
Sitting in the dirt and singing
behind barbed wire.
Great whirlwinds, shining dizziness, bubbling drunkenness
standing upside down above us.
Screams with a noise like the shaking of bells.
Guard my sleep,
bite back at my pain,
leave our tears and sorrows behind
within the rotting hollows in the silver pool.
The silver water turns red
with the red roses of pain that bloom  beneath the surface.
The thorn necklace lines the edge like barbed wire,
the green leaves become uniformed guards.
We'll leave our pain behind, leave it
in the darkness.
In the darkness of the human heart
we will hide our pain.
©2007-2009 ~purplenekokitty
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Got the inspiration and wrote. Not much more to say.

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:iconocd3:
that was actually quite an interesting read. at this point im assuming john inspired it
:iconpurplenekokitty:
actually, no.

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How deep the Rabbit-hole?
"The doll... it's looking at me... MAKE IT STOP!"
Spinny spinny spinny spinny spin EXPLOSION!!!
:typerhappy: [link]
:iconsilverperfume:
I loooove this one! I really like the use of language in this poem like in the prases "screams with a noise like the shaking of bells" and "within the rotting hollows in the silver pool". This is I think my personal favorite of everything that you've written. I think that everyone can relate to this poem. Awesome work!

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2 quotes that usually hold true: 1. “It is most fun to hang out with the crazy and odd people because there is never a dull moment.” 2. “The brightest ideas come on the blackest of nights.”
:iconpurplenekokitty:
:bow: Thank you, very very much. I like this piece a lot too.

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How deep the Rabbit-hole?
"The doll... it's looking at me... MAKE IT STOP!"
Spinny spinny spinny spinny spin EXPLOSION!!!
:typerhappy: [link]
:iconhalf-dragon:
hmmm i like it alot. Care to mention wat inspired it love?

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I'm a GUY, so I MUST only want to get into your pants.

I have ADD/ADHD, so I MUST be a stupid airhead.

I'm MORMON, so I MUST not be a Christian.
:iconfinalflash0:
lol in my opinion that is so wrong, death can be peaceful and good too, you should write some bright poems too not just dark ones, well anyways you did a nice job just not complete for me =P

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Everything has to be done with steps nothing can be done in an instant so walk step by step till you reach for your goal or dream.
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I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this in your sig
:iconsilverperfume:
Again, you're very welcome; it was a well earned comment! :)

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2 quotes that usually hold true: 1. “It is most fun to hang out with the crazy and odd people because there is never a dull moment.” 2. “The brightest ideas come on the blackest of nights.”
:iconpurplenekokitty:
a book im reading for the third time: Dangerous Angels, by Francesca Lia Block. i'm not exactly sure why, but this book just gets to me. something about it pulls me in, makes me think.

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How deep the Rabbit-hole?
"The doll... it's looking at me... MAKE IT STOP!"
Spinny spinny spinny spinny spin EXPLOSION!!!
:typerhappy: [link]
:iconhalf-dragon:
Ahhh should i be scared since ur thinking?

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I'm a GUY, so I MUST only want to get into your pants.

I have ADD/ADHD, so I MUST be a stupid airhead.

I'm MORMON, so I MUST not be a Christian.

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